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2019-01-03 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

학생이 쓴 원문

I didn\'t think about that, but sometimes when I watch survive movies, I little bit thought about that. Well, I think that I can\'t survive alone in island. Because I don\'t know how to live alone, and I didn\'t live alone also I don\'t know how to cook. But I think most why I can\'t live alone because it will be very lonely. I can\'t endure it. It will be every one\'s thinking.

강사 첨삭

Hello!^^

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Cheers!
Jean

I didn\'t think about that, but sometimes when I watch survive movies, I little bit thought about that.
>> I haven\'t really thought about it but when I watch movies about survival, I sometimes think about it.

Well, I think that I can\'t survive alone in island. Because I don\'t know how to live alone, and I didn\'t live alone also I don\'t know how to cook.
>> Well, I think that I can\'t survive alone on an island because I don\'t know how to live alone, and don\'t even know how to cook my own food.

But I think most why I can\'t live alone because it will be very lonely. I can\'t endure it.
>> However, I believe that the most important reason why I can\'t live alone is because I won\'t be able to endure the loneliness.

It will be every one\'s thinking.
>> Most people would probably feel the same.

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