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2019-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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What have you been up to this past New Year's day? I usually stayed with my family. I did not do anything, but I felt really good because I stayed with my family. It is really good memory. I still cherish that memory. Some past New Year's day I stayed with my friends or Xgirl friend. Both are good. I stayed with my family too this year but it is a little bit special because we went to the sauna and we talked a lot each other. I was so happy. I never forget it.

강사 첨삭

Hi Charlie,

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

 

What have you been up to this past New Year’s Day?
Please answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

 

I usually stayed with my family. I did not do anything, but I felt really good because I stayed with my family. It is really good memory.
I still cherish that memory. Some past New Year\'s day I stayed with my friends or Xgirl friend. Both are good. I stayed with my family too this year but it is a little bit special because we went to the sauna and we talked a lot each other. I was so happy. I never forget it.


 

CORRECTIONS:

 

I stayed with my family. I did not do anything, but I felt really good because I stayed with them. It is really a good memory and I will cherish it. Some past New Year’s Days, I stayed with my friends or ex-girlfriend. Both are good. I stayed with my family this year and it is a little bit special because we went to the sauna and we talked a lot. I was so happy. I never forget it.

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** Dear [Name], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊 Please take note of the corrections. ^^

 Cheers!! Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

 

               

                       

           

                         

                         

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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