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Jean
I think people have no times because of working, so many people read news paper on morning with breakfast.
>> I think that those people who have no free time because of work can\'t read the newspaper in the morning while having breakfast.
My father also read news paper on morning. But some people read news paper on subway or bus. I think this is more good than read news paper on morning.
>> My father also reads the newspaper in the morning, but some people read them on the subway or bus. I believe this is better than reading the newspaper in the morning.
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