HW
학생이 쓴 원문
1. set off fireworks 폭죽을 쏘아올리다
2. assignment 과제
3. new year\'s resolution 새해 결심
4. overweight 비만의
5. broadsheet newspaper 신문
The new year\'s first broadsheet newspaper is about new year\'s resolution. There was resolution about overweight girls reduce her\'s weight.
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1. set off fireworks 폭죽을 쏘아올리다
2. assignment 과제
3. new year\'s resolution 새해 결심
4. overweight 비만의
5. broadsheet newspaper 신문
The new year\'s first broadsheet newspaper is about new year\'s resolution.
>> The New Year\'s first broadsheet newspaper is about people\'s New Year\'s resolutions.
There was resolution about overweight girls reduce her\'s weight.
>> One resolution that I remember reading was about girls going on a diet or aiming to lose weight.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.