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I think we have to know about dinosaurs by knowledge. Some of my friends know many kinds of dinosaurs by knowledge. Actually, I already for got them, bu t I can remember some dinosaurs. I think it is not bad to know dinosaurs.
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I think we have to know about dinosaurs by knowledge. Some of my friends know many kinds of dinosaurs by knowledge. Actually, I already for got them, bu t I can remember some dinosaurs. I think it is not bad to know dinosaurs.
>> I think we need to have knowledge on dinosaurs. Some of my friends know a lot of information about dinosaurs. Actually, I already forgot them, but I can remember some dinosaurs. I believe it\'s not bad to learn about these creatures.
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