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2019-03-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jean

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I think siria is the most dangerous country in the world. Because there are many terrorists and that country\'s people still suffer in the war. So our country\'s people can\'t go to the siria. I hope that Syria\'s civil war was over. It is very terrible situation in the earth. I watched the advertisement of siria\'s people. I want that they got happy early.

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Hello!^^

Thank you for sending your homework.

Cheers!
Jean

I think siria is the most dangerous country in the world. Because there are many terrorists and that country\'s people still suffer in the war.
>> I think Syria is the most dangerous country in the world because there are many terrorists and the people still suffer from the war.

So our country\'s people can\'t go to the siria. I hope that Syria\'s civil war was over.
>> So Koreans can\'t travel to Syria. I hope that Syria\'s civil war would end soon.

It is very terrible situation in the earth. I watched the advertisement of siria\'s people.
>> A civil war is one of the most terrible situations in the world. I watched an advertisement about Syrians suffering from the war.

I want that they got happy early.
>> I hope they\'re going to have a happy life soon.

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