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Way to go Kelly!

~ T. Irene ~

Hi it\'s my answers for some questions from previous ielts test.

>>> Hi! This is my answers for some of the previous IELTS questions.

so connections between sentenses are weird.

>>> So the thought among the sentences are a little weird.

I hope your understand

>>> Correct. (^_^)
 I strongly believe that those who work hard are success in their field or in the society.

>>> I strongly believe that those who work hard become successful in their field or in the society. 
 Because I think nothing win the endeavor.

>>> Because with hard work, one can reach their endeavors.
 For instanse, when I was a high school student, I didn\'t like mathematics.

>>> Correct.
It was hard for me to understand.

>>> Correct.

However, the university where I want to enter required me to get a nice score of mathematics.

>>> However, the university I enrolled in required me to get a good score in mathematics.

So I tried to study the subject.

>>> Correct.

>>> So I tried to study hard for the subject.

After so many struggles and difficulties, I finally got a great score of math,

>>> After so many struggles and difficulties, I finally got a high score in the subject.
 I believe that effort is the most important factor to be success.

>>>  I believe that exerting effort is the most important factor to be successful.
 Aside from that, innate talent is also essential for success.

>>>  Correct.

 There are a variety of reasons for failure, and the main reason is a lack of effort.

>>> On the other hand, there are a variety of reasons for failure too. One is the lack of motivation or initiative.

It is clear that if you work hard, you are able to achieve your goals.

>>> Correct.

 even though a university degree helps you work in a good condition, it dose not make you a success or perfect person.

>>> Even though a university degree will prepare you for a good condition, it does not make you a successful or perfect person.