HW

2019-04-01 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

학생이 쓴 원문

When I was a primary school student, I learned from teacher every month how to choose nice foods and why junkfoods are bad. Because of constant education, I studied healthy lifestyle naturally. I strongly believe that doctors have to encourage people to improve healthy Ordinary people usually believe doctors since they think dortors are professional. That is the reason if doctor educate people, the effort would increase dramatically. There are a variety of factors to live unhealty, one of the fators is eating unbalanced foods For instance, some people eat meats too much, and other people intake only vegetables. If they keep their eating habit, they would be unhealth. Many Korean do exercise. They enjoy playing football,baseball, and basketball. I think Korean like physical activities.

강사 첨삭

Hello Kelly!  Wow! You answered a week\'s worth of homework all at once. ^_^

~ T. Irene ~

When I was a primary school student, I learned from teacher every month how to choose nice foods  and why junkfoods are bad.

>>> When I was a primary school student, I learned from my teacher how to choose healthy foods  and why junkfoods are bad.
 Because of constant education, I studied healthy lifestyle naturally.

>>> Because of the constant education, I studied how to live a healthy lifestyle naturally. 
 I strongly believe that doctors have to encourage people to improve healthy.

>>> I strongly believe that doctors have to encourage people to improve their health. 
 Ordinary people usually believe doctors since they think dortors are professional.

>>> Ordinary people usually believe doctors since they think physicians are professionals.
 That is the reason if doctor educate people, the effort would increase dramatically.

>>>  That is the reason why if doctors educate people, the result would positively increase dramatically. 
 There are a variety of factors to live unhealty, one of the fators is eating unbalanced foods

>>> There are a variety of factors that lead to an unhealthy body. One is eating unbalanced or unhealthy foods.
 For instance, some people eat meats too much, and other people intake only vegetables.

>>> For instance, some people eat too much meat while others intake pure vegetables only.
 If they keep their eating habit, they would be unhealth.

>>> If they keep this habit, it would lead to a very unhealthy lifestyle.
 Many Korean do exercise.

>>> Many Koreans exercise.

They enjoy playing football,baseball, and basketball.

>>> Correct.
 I think Korean like physical activities.

>>>  I think Koreans like physical activities.





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