HW
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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~ T. Irene ~
When I was a primary school student, I learned from teacher every month how to choose nice foods and why junkfoods are bad.
>>> When I was a primary school student, I learned from my teacher how to choose healthy foods and why junkfoods are bad.
Because of constant education, I studied healthy lifestyle naturally.
>>> Because of the constant education, I studied how to live a healthy lifestyle naturally.
I strongly believe that doctors have to encourage people to improve healthy.
>>> I strongly believe that doctors have to encourage people to improve their health.
Ordinary people usually believe doctors since they think dortors are professional.
>>> Ordinary people usually believe doctors since they think physicians are professionals.
That is the reason if doctor educate people, the effort would increase dramatically.
>>> That is the reason why if doctors educate people, the result would positively increase dramatically.
There are a variety of factors to live unhealty, one of the fators is eating unbalanced foods
>>> There are a variety of factors that lead to an unhealthy body. One is eating unbalanced or unhealthy foods.
For instance, some people eat meats too much, and other people intake only vegetables.
>>> For instance, some people eat too much meat while others intake pure vegetables only.
If they keep their eating habit, they would be unhealth.
>>> If they keep this habit, it would lead to a very unhealthy lifestyle.
Many Korean do exercise.
>>> Many Koreans exercise.
They enjoy playing football,baseball, and basketball.
>>> Correct.
I think Korean like physical activities.
>>> I think Koreans like physical activities.
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