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Thanks Kelly! ^_^
~T. Irene~
it is hard to control for teenagers since they are like little adults.
>>> It is hard to control teenagers since they are like little adults.
They have own ideas.
>>> They have their own ideas.
they have independants so they wish to do thenselves
>>> They are independent and wish to do things by themselves.
it is easy to control for children because they don\'t have much ideas.
>>> It is easier to control young children because they don\'t have much ideas yet.
For instance, if you give them a piece of chocolates, they would follow you.
>>> Correct.
they need a lot of help even go to toilet.
>>> They need a lot of help even as simple as going to the toilet.
most of Korean teenagers usually respect old people.
>>> Korean teenagers are taught to respect old people.
In my case, when I was a teenager, I respected my teachers and parents.
>>> Correct.
Because I learned from old people saying elderly people took care of me.
>>> I learned a lot from these old people and they really took good care of me.
teenagers are same regardless of generation.
>>> I believe that teenagers are all the same regardless of their generation.
They are independents and brave
>>> They are independent and brave.
Teenagers are usually pursue their dream without limitation.
>>> Teenagers nowadays, pursue their dreams without hesitations.
They don\'t have lots of considerations about money or time one of the important things to them is pride.
>>> They are not conscious about money and/or time. They focus on their goal and their pride.
old people have a lot of considerations in order to do something special.
>>> On the other hand, old people usually have to consider a lot of things first before doing something special.
Because they had been went through for failure and have a responsibility about their family
>>> Because they have been through a lot of failures already and they are responsible for their family.
I prefer wet weather, because I like rain
>>> I prefer the wet weather because I like the rain.
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