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Another one Kelly! ^_^
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it is nice looking outside raining.
>>> It is nice to look outside when it is raining.
There are a variety of weathers in summer, raining,sunny and even windy.
>>> There are different kinds of weather conditions during the summer season: sunny, rainy and windy.
my hometown seoul, the capital of Korea has four seasons, spring,summer,fall, and winter.
>>> There are four seasons in my hometown, Seoul. These are spring, summer, fall, and winter.
In spring and fall, people usually enjoy outing because of nice weather.
>>> In spring and fall seasons, people usually enjoy going out because of the nice weather.
In summer, those who want to avoid sun go swimming pool or enjoy inside entertainment
>>> During the summer season, those who want to avoid exposure to the sun go the indoor swimming pools or do some indoor entertainment.
lastly in winter, general people stay in a home in order to protect a cold.
>>> Lastly, during the winter season, most people stay at home to protect themselves from the bitter cold.
The university which I wanted to enroll in required me to get a good score in mathematics.
>>> The university I wanted to enroll in required me to get a good score in mathematics.
After that, I realized that I felt a sense of accomplishment when I solved the hard questions.
>>> Correct.
I seem to enjoy solving complicated questions.
>>> Correct.
There is a strong relation between mathematics and nursing, so I am able to apply the subject in my field
>>> Correct.
That is the reason I become interested in the subject nowadays.
>>> That is the reason I became interested in the subject nowadays.
Although I studied the subjects for short times, I am able to talk about those fields since I had been went through those experiences.
>>> Although I studied the subjects for short times, I was able to talk about those fields since I went through those experiences.
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