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This is the last one I corrected. ^_^

~ T. Irene ~

because I am good at a hand writing, I always bring a hand written letter, when I go my friends birthday party.

>>> Because I am good at a hand writing, I always make a hand-written greeting whenever I attend my friends birthday party.     
 I also like to receive hand writing lettes.

>>> I also like receiving hand-written letters.      
 it is sincere much more than typing on a computer.

>>> It is more sincere than one that is printed in the computer.     
 those who write big and clean lettes are positive and productive while those who write small and weird words are negative.

>>> I believe that  those who write big and clear letters are positive and productive people while those who write small and weird-looking words are negative-minded people.     
 if you are typing on a computer, you need only 5 minutes.

>>>  When you type on the computer, it takes only about 5 minutes of your time.     
 Although hand writing may sometimes be bothersome, you may give people a sincere.

>>> Although writing with your hands may be sometimes bothersome, it gives a sincere message.       

However, even typing is completely convenient, it is hard to display your sincere.

>>> Typing is so convenient but it hardly displays one\'s sincerity.      
 it may takes a lot of time

>>> It takes a lot of time though.      
 Q.(I don\'t have a idea how to answer this question->)what one would do living in this lifestyle?

>>>   What does one need to do to be able to live this lifestyle? (It means, what you need to do in order to have that kind of lifestyle.)   
 We used to go to the gym almost every day.

>>>  Correct.     
 It was hard for me to go to a gym.

>>>  Correct.      
 sujin who really loved boxing recommended me

>>>  My friend, Sujin who really loves boxing, recommended it to me.
It was fun and exciting.

>>>  Correct.    
 I am good at photo taking.

>>>  Correct.    

>>> I am good at taking photographs.

I enjoy taking photos for my friends.

>>>  Correct.    

>>>    I enjoy taking photos of my friends.  
 I usually take the scenery.

>>> I usually take a picture of the sceneries.      
 when I travel, I usually take photos to remember the place.

>>> Whenever I travel to other places, I usually take a photo of the place as a souvenir.