hw
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One more to go Kelly! ^_^
~. T. Irene~
I usually save photos on my phone.
>>> Correct.
I always bring my smartphone so I can easily see those photos anytime at anywhere.
>>> I always bring my smartphone so I can easily see those photos anytime and anywhere.
>>> I always bring my smartphone so I can easily see those photos anytime, anywhere.
I like to take the pictures of the landscape.
>>> I like taking pictures of the landscape.
he was work for 40 years and retired 3years ago.
>>> He worked for 40 years and just retired 3 years ago.
Even though his friends had been working, he remained unemployed at that time.
>>> Even when his friends were already working, he remained unemployed at that time.
There are a variety of well-paid jobs in the society, such as doctors, lawyers and even artist.
>>> There are a variety of well-paid jobs in the society, such as doctors, lawyers and even artists.
they are deserving because they have been working hard.
>>> These professionals deserve it because they worked hard.
it is hard for robots to work with detail.
>>> It will be hard for robots to work with precise details.
I like city where there are a lot of convenient things around.
>>> I like living in the city where there are a lot of convenient things to do.
the place is a famous city for its foods.
>>> The city is a famous place for good food.
I can easily find materials for studying
>>> Correct.
I usually study English in the library.
>>> Correct.
There are a lot of trees surrounding the library.
>>> Correct.
Every meal time, I have to go outside.
>>> Correct.
>>> Every meal time, I have to go out.
You are not likely to focus on your study.
>>> Correct.
because teenagers have independence, they wish to do everything without help.
>>> Teenagers are very independent such that they don\'t wish any help in whatever they are doing.
teenagers have a high intellectual level, so it is easy to control them.
>>> Teenagers are highly intellectual so it\'s easy control (teach) them.
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