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Hello Kelly!  Thanks for sending your compositions. Way to go!

~Teacher Irene~

I think teenagers are same regardless of generation.

>>> I think teenagers act in the same manner regardless of their generation.
 another one is intellectual level.

>>> Most of them also think in the same level.
 Teenagers usually enjoy spending a time using their smartphone.

>>> Teenagers usually enjoy spending time using their smartphone. 
I, actually, enjoy looking at the sky. 

>>> Correct.

Beside that, I live in a high flat, so it is easy for me to see a lot of stars and a moon.

>>> Beside that, I live in a flat high up in a building so it is easy for me to see a lot of stars and the moon. 
 people complain about products which bought from an online shopping site.

>>> A lot of people complain about products they have bought from online shopping sites. 
 you have not been tried the products.

>>>  They have not even tried the products yet.
 I asked for a refund and the seller accepted it.

>>>   One time, I asked for a refund and the seller granted it.
Although it was quiet expensive, the seller treated me nicely. 

>>> Correct.
 she complained about all foods, although she ate all foods already.

>>> She complained about all the foods, although she ate them all already. 
 It was one of the weird experiences all of my life.

>>>  It was one of the weird experiences in my life.
 I feel tired and was exhausted  korean usually go sea for trip.

>>> I felt tired and was exhausted. Koreans would usually go for a sea trip. 
 when I work overtime, I feel stressed out.

>>>  Whenever I work overtime, I usually feel stressed out.
 It is fun to see when my friend wear my clothes.

>>> It is fun to see my friend wearing my clothes. 
 underwear is not suitable item for sharing since it is a private thing.

>>>  An underwear should not be shared since it is a personal thing.
 since I was a teenager, I held a party.

>>> When I was a teenager, I held a party. 
 I would like to become a professional.

>>>  Correct.