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2019-04-09 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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I was convinced that I could dream. I think he is handsome since his appearance meets my standards. he is challenging person I have ever seen so far. I taught cooking to my cousin sujin last christmas she is tall and little obese. there is a nice wifi. I realized the information was wrong. she decided to start her business with her family. I\'d like to write a kind of documentary about my friend. She can not give me a refund since they sold already. She was really irresponsible person. she solved the problem with logical thinking. whenever I have a time, I go shopping. It was a autobiography from a famous person. I borrowed it without burden. The tree is strong in the cold. I realized that I felt a sense of accomplishment when I solved the problem Also, I knew I enjoyed solving complicated questions it was nice experiences, but I could not remember all of this. Even though I studied for only short times, I may easily find a way to do related the subject.

강사 첨삭

thanks Kelly! I like your compositions.

~ T. Irene ~

I was convinced that I could dream.

>>>  Correct.    
 I think he is handsome since his appearance meets my standards.

>>>  Correct.  
 he is challenging person I have ever seen so far.

>>>  He is the most challenging person I have ever met so far.   
 I taught cooking to my cousin Sujin last Christmas

>>>  Correct.  
 she is tall and little obese.

>>>  She is tall and a little obese.  
 there is a nice wifi.

>>>  The WIFI connection is good.    
 I realized the information was wrong.

>>>  Correct.   
She decided to start her business with her family.

>>>  Correct.     
 I\'d like to write a kind of documentary about my friend.

>>>  Correct.   
 She can not give me a refund since they sold already.

>>>  She cannot give me a refund since they have sold it already.    
 She was really irresponsible person.

>>>   She was really an irresponsible person.   
She solved the problem with logical thinking.

>>>  Correct.  

>>> She solved the problem using logical thinking.
 Whenever I have a time, I go shopping.

>>>  Correct. 
 It was a autobiography from a famous person.

>>>  It was an autobiography from a famous person.    
 I borrowed it without burden(?).

>>>  I borrowed it without asking for permission.    
 The tree is strong in the cold.

>>>  The tree can withstand the cold.    
 I realized that I felt a sense of accomplishment when I solved the problem.

>>>   Correct.   
 Also, I knew I enjoyed solving complicated questions.

>>>   Correct.   
 it was nice experiences, but I could not remember all of this.

>>>  They were good experiences but I could not remember all of them.    
 Even though I studied for only short times, I may easily find a way to do related the subject.

>>>  Even though I studied it for only short number of times, I can easily find a way to think of a related subject.    

>>>  Even though I studied it for only short number of times, I can easily relate it to any subject. 



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