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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
thanks Kelly! I like your compositions.
~ T. Irene ~
I was convinced that I could dream.
>>> Correct.
I think he is handsome since his appearance meets my standards.
>>> Correct.
he is challenging person I have ever seen so far.
>>> He is the most challenging person I have ever met so far.
I taught cooking to my cousin Sujin last Christmas
>>> Correct.
she is tall and little obese.
>>> She is tall and a little obese.
there is a nice wifi.
>>> The WIFI connection is good.
I realized the information was wrong.
>>> Correct.
She decided to start her business with her family.
>>> Correct.
I\'d like to write a kind of documentary about my friend.
>>> Correct.
She can not give me a refund since they sold already.
>>> She cannot give me a refund since they have sold it already.
She was really irresponsible person.
>>> She was really an irresponsible person.
She solved the problem with logical thinking.
>>> Correct.
>>> She solved the problem using logical thinking.
Whenever I have a time, I go shopping.
>>> Correct.
It was a autobiography from a famous person.
>>> It was an autobiography from a famous person.
I borrowed it without burden(?).
>>> I borrowed it without asking for permission.
The tree is strong in the cold.
>>> The tree can withstand the cold.
I realized that I felt a sense of accomplishment when I solved the problem.
>>> Correct.
Also, I knew I enjoyed solving complicated questions.
>>> Correct.
it was nice experiences, but I could not remember all of this.
>>> They were good experiences but I could not remember all of them.
Even though I studied for only short times, I may easily find a way to do related the subject.
>>> Even though I studied it for only short number of times, I can easily find a way to think of a related subject.
>>> Even though I studied it for only short number of times, I can easily relate it to any subject.
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