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Hello Kelly! Here is another one. ^_^
~T. Irene~
She was cute so I wanted to be like her.
>>> Correct.
those who are interest in movies like superstar, while those who are not interest in movies don\'t know who they are.
>>> Those who are interested in movies would probably know who the superstar is while those who are not into films won\'t know the idols.
I want to be friends with her.
>>> Correct.
she was a mathematics teacher, but nowadays she works as a fashion designer.
>>> She used to be a mathematics teacher but nowadays, she works as a fashion designer.
Her story is very interesting.
>>> Correct.
She desired (dreamt) to be a fashion designer and pursued her dream without hesitations (second thoughts).
>>> Correct.
I would like to know more about her.
>>> Correct.
she\'s name is sujin, a mother of my friend.
>>> Her name is Sujin. She\'s my friend\'s mom.
I would like to make a friend who is a kind.
>>> I would like to have/meet a friend who is a kind.
I wish that we have same interests because I enjoy sharing ideas with each other.
>>> I wish that we have same interests because I enjoy sharing ideas with her/him/them.
we are closed to each other.
>>> We are close to each other.
The store is open 24 hours a day.
>>> Correct.
There are three kinds of coffees in my home from other countries.
>>> Our coffee at home comes from three different parts of the world.
These are brazil,kenya and colombia.
>>> We order or buy them from Brazil, Kenya and Colombia.
The most popular one is kenya\'s coffee.
>>> The most popular one is Kenyan coffee.
because I don\'t like tea, I only buy coffee.
>>> I only buy coffee since I don\'t like drinking tea.
since I woke up early, I need to drink a cup of coffee.
>>> Whenever I wake up early in the morning, I needed to drink a cup of coffee.
The cafe is open 24 hours a day.
>>> Correct.
I am very appreciated her.
>>> I appreciate her help.
>>> I appreciate what she has done.
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