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~ T. Irene~
pictures make the mood of home brightly.
>>> Pictures make the mood at home brighter.
I like a kind of paintings of sceneries.
>>> I like those landscape paintings.
if someone draw a picture of me, I am likely to be a embarrassed.
>>> If someone offers to draw my picture/face, I would feel very embarrassed.
she\'s appearance is outstanding
>>> Her appearance is outstanding.
she looks like a million dollars.
>>> She looks like a million-dollar girl.
One of the drawbacks of being beautiful is too much interest from people.
>>> One of the drawbacks of being beautiful is attracting/drawing too much interest from people.
most koreans want to become a beautiful person since there are a lot of advantages to be a beautiful.
>>> Most Koreans want to become beautiful since there are a lot of advantages to being beautiful.
so people try to study make up, manage skins, and even do plastic surgery.
>>> This is why many people learn how to apply cosmetics, manage a good skin and sometimes undergo plastic surgery.
Even though children don\'t have much of ideas about fashion they need to learn how to dress well.
>>> Even though children don\'t have much ideas about fashion they need to learn how to dress well.
since it is hard to learn about fashion when they are become adults already.
>>> This is because it is hard to learn about fashion when they become adults already.
some people usually enjoy sharing news with each other
>>> Some people usually enjoy sharing news with others.
beside that, because social media is anonymous, people can easily share the news.
>>> Besides that, it is very easy to go anonymous on social media, people can easily share the news.
sometimes I disgusted when I eat a lot of foods before bed.
>>> Sometimes I am disgusted when I eat a lot of food before bedtime.
although they may sometimes be intelligent, they are just liars.
>>> Although they may sometimes be intelligent, the fact is that they are just liars.
they always send to me an email about sales of products.
>>> They always send me emails about promotional sales.
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