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I haven\'t really though about it.

>>>  Correct.   

but I\'m pretty sure that this is because of advanced technologies.

>>>   But I\'m pretty sure that this is because of advance technologies.

when parents were young, they played with friends outside and shared almost everything each other.

>>>   When our parents were young, they played with friends outdoors and shared almost everything with each other.  

so they can get a cooperation.

>>>   So they learned about cooperation.  

However, nowadays, most children usually enjoy playing computer games and watching TV programms by themselves (alone).

>>>   Correct.  

 they usually keep their privacy and even consider friends as competitors.

>>> Correct.

>>>  They usually guard their privacy and even consider friends as competitors.

 they don\'t have a chance to learn about collaboration.

>>>   Correct. 

>>> They never learn about collaborating with others.  
 One of the drawbacks is that rules sometimes block children\'s creativity.

>>> Correct.   

 if they just follow the rulse that adult made, they would be live typical life.

>>>  If they just follow the rules set but the adults, they would live a normal life.  
 One of Korean celebrity says \"do your best\". it\'s sometimes boring saying, but I think it is so nice setence.

>>>   One of Korean celebrities said, \"Do your best\".

 it\'s sometimes boring saying, but I think it is so nice setence.   

>>>   It\'s sometimes a boring saying but I think it makes sense.    

this is because if everyone try to do their best, they are going to live more healthier and happier than now.

>>> This is because if everyone try to do their best, they are going to live a healthier and happier life in the future.   
 I can easily excel in my field of work.

>>>  Correct.    

 I was going to go to a repair shop, but it was on weekends, so I tried to find a solution on the internet.

>>>    I was going to the a repair shop but it was weekend so I tried to solve this internet issue.