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2019-05-10 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

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I wrote emails to friends. it was kind of only way to keep in touch with friends. because at that time, smartphone was not normal. In my case, I am happy to receive emails abouth promotions or sales from stores. I am pretty sure a lot of people think the same. If the email is work-related, I would probably reply as fast as I could. I actually learn it few years ago from school. I guess I have afford to study japanese. I wish I\'d like to learn it from japanese friends although I don\'t have the friends yet. it would be nice if we study in a library which is nearby my place. The foods are really great I\'ve never had so far. there are tons of books and videos. japanese is really attracting language. there are several ways to study a seconde language such as learn from teachers,study with friends and even study by themselves by watching language videos. if you are good at English, you\'ll get a lot of opportunities something like get a job and make friends.

강사 첨삭

Happy Friday Kelly!

~ T. Irene~

I wrote emails to friends.

>>> Correct. 

>>> I wrote a lot of emails to my friends.  

it was kind of only way to keep in touch with friends. because at that time, smartphone was not normal.

>>>  It was kind of the only way to keep in touch with friends because at that time, smartphones were not available or common. 
 In my case, I am happy to receive emails about promotions or sales from stores.

>>> Correct.
 I am pretty sure a lot of people think the same.

>>> Correct.   
 If the email is work-related, I would probably reply as fast as I could.

>>> Correct.   
 I actually learn it few years ago from school.

>>>  I actually learned it a few years ago from school.
 I guess I have afford to study japanese.

>>>   I guess I can afford to study Japanese. 
 I wish I\'d like to learn it from japanese friends although I don\'t have the friends yet.

>>>    I wish I can learn it from Japanese friends although I don\'t have those friends yet.
 it would be nice if we study in a library which is nearby my place.

>>>  It would be nice if we study in the library which is near my place. 
 The foods are really great I\'ve never had so far.

>>>  The foods are the greatest I\'ve ever had so far.   
 there are tons of books and videos.

>>> Correct.   
 japanese is really attracting language.

>>> Japanese is really an attractive language. 
 there are several ways to study a seconde language such as learn from teachers,study with friends and even study by themselves by watching language videos. 

>>>   There are several ways to study a second language such as having teachers, studying with friends or alone, and by watching language videos. 
 if you are good at English, you\'ll get a lot of opportunities something like get a job and make friends.

>>>  If you are good at English, you\'ll get a lot of opportunities like getting a job and making friends.    





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