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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy Friday Kelly!
~ T. Irene~
I wrote emails to friends.
>>> Correct.
>>> I wrote a lot of emails to my friends.
it was kind of only way to keep in touch with friends. because at that time, smartphone was not normal.
>>> It was kind of the only way to keep in touch with friends because at that time, smartphones were not available or common.
In my case, I am happy to receive emails about promotions or sales from stores.
>>> Correct.
I am pretty sure a lot of people think the same.
>>> Correct.
If the email is work-related, I would probably reply as fast as I could.
>>> Correct.
I actually learn it few years ago from school.
>>> I actually learned it a few years ago from school.
I guess I have afford to study japanese.
>>> I guess I can afford to study Japanese.
I wish I\'d like to learn it from japanese friends although I don\'t have the friends yet.
>>> I wish I can learn it from Japanese friends although I don\'t have those friends yet.
it would be nice if we study in a library which is nearby my place.
>>> It would be nice if we study in the library which is near my place.
The foods are really great I\'ve never had so far.
>>> The foods are the greatest I\'ve ever had so far.
there are tons of books and videos.
>>> Correct.
japanese is really attracting language.
>>> Japanese is really an attractive language.
there are several ways to study a seconde language such as learn from teachers,study with friends and even study by themselves by watching language videos.
>>> There are several ways to study a second language such as having teachers, studying with friends or alone, and by watching language videos.
if you are good at English, you\'ll get a lot of opportunities something like get a job and make friends.
>>> If you are good at English, you\'ll get a lot of opportunities like getting a job and making friends.
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