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2019-05-10 · 첨삭 강사 Irene

학생이 쓴 원문

there are a lot of difficulties of learning a new language, and the main reason is that people are not used to speaking new languages. I personally believe that a language is maden by cultures and kind of habits from natives, so it is hard to study it since we are not a native. so to improve our language skills, we propably try to understand their cultures and habits. I\'m pretty sure it would sometimes make you annoyed or bored, you have to overcome this period. if people study with teacher, their skill would improve fastly. I always bring a cup and get water from water machine. she is very busy working nowadays, so it is hard for her to recycle something else. if she hadn\'t taught me the importance of the environment, I wouldn\'t have known it. recycling is hard since it sometimes is annoying, but my mom try to keep her spirit. we are in an earth so environmental education is important all I\'m saying is we are live in an earth just a moment, so we shouldn\'t damage the earth

강사 첨삭

Kelly, thank you for your thoughts regarding this issue. ^_^

~ T. Irene  ~

there are a lot of difficulties of learning a new language, and the main reason is that people are not used to speaking new languages.

>>>  There are a lot of difficulties one will encounter when learning a new language and the first one probably is that people are not used to speaking new languages.

I personally believe that a language is maden by cultures and kind of habits from natives, so it is hard to study it since we are not a native.

>>>  I personally believe that a language is made by the culture and kind of habits of natives so it is hard to study it since we are not a native of that place.
 so to improve our language skills, we propably try to understand their cultures and habits.

>>> So in order to improve our language skills, we propably need try to understand their culture and habits.
 I\'m pretty sure it would sometimes make you annoyed or bored, you have to overcome this period.

>>>   I\'m pretty sure it would sometimes make you annoyed or bored so you have to overcome this period.
 if people study with teacher, their skill would improve fastly.

>>> If people study with a teacher, their skill would improve faster.
 I always bring a cup and get water from water machine.

>>>   I always bring a cup and get water from the water machine.
 She is very busy working nowadays, so it is hard for her to recycle something else.

>>> Correct.  

>>>  She is very busy working nowadays, so it is hard for her to recycle trash in her home.
 If she hadn\'t taught me the importance of the environment, I wouldn\'t have known it.

>>> Correct.  
 recycling is hard since it sometimes is annoying, but my mom try to keep her spirit.

>>> Recycling is hard since it sometimes is annoying but my mom tries to keep her spirit up.  
 we are in an earth so environmental education is important

>>> We have only one earth and we live in it so environmental education is important.
 all I\'m saying is we are live in an earth just a moment, so we shouldn\'t damage the earth

>>>  All I\'m saying is we only live on earth in a short time so we shouldn\'t damage the it.   








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