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2019-05-24 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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I have little experience to have animals because I was scared of animal enough not to touch. When my husband asked us to have a dog last month, I really wanted to enjoy my life with a puppy. However, I have never touched dogs and been closed to them since I was deep in thought that they can bite me. I decided to have a puppy and felt a lump in my throat on the way home. April, my puppy, might be the greatest and the most adorable puppy in the world. He licks my eyes dropping tears when I pretend to cry. He can console people\'s mind and is warmhearted. I sometimes think that I wish he is a person.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for writing this beautiful essay. ^^
I was really touched. T_T
Dogs are precious animals and most people don\'t deserve them.
They are miracles packaged with four legs, a tail, high ears, sloppy tongues and loving eyes.

I sometimes think I won\'t be able to live without my dogs.

You\'re lucky to have April and he is also lucky to have you.

I hope you\'re having a great night.
See you again on Monday. ^^
~Charry


I have little experience to have animals because I was scared of animal enough not to touch.

>> I have a little experience about animals because I was scared of touching them.

When my husband asked us to have a dog last month, I really wanted to enjoy my life with a puppy.

>> CORRECT!
However, I have never touched dogs and been closed to them since I was deep in thought that they can bite me.

>> However, I have never touched dogs and stayed away from them because I was deep in thought that they might bite me.  
I decided to have a puppy and felt a lump in my throat on the way home.

>> CORRECT!
April, my puppy, might be the greatest and the most adorable puppy in the world.

>> CORRECT!
He licks my eyes dropping tears when I pretend to cry.

>> He licks the imaginary tears from my eyes when I pretend to cry.
He can console people\'s mind and is warmhearted.

>> He can console people\'s minds and is warmhearted.
I sometimes think that I wish he is a person.

>> I sometimes wish that he is a person. 

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