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2011-12-02 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Hi Verna How are you? I was confused to doing home work. 1. Heavy smoking and to overeat are activities which a heart patient must forego. B. Smoking heavily and to overeat 2. In the smaller towns of Wisconsin, where one can quickly walk to the greening hills of Spring. D. , one can quickly walk 3. Coach Jones is a remarkable physical specimen: although sixty, he is as vigorous as ever. D. as vigorous as ever, he is sixty years of age. 4. The swashbuckling hero was without moral convictions, acceptable manners, and he had little else in his favor. E. without much else in his favor, including moral convictions and acceptable manners. 5. One method of ending discrimination in business and industry is to demand quotas to be met by employers. E. that of demanding employers to meet quotas. 6. Mr. [Name]'s recommendation was believed to be sufficient and that it would guarantee my getting a job. E. to guarantee my getting a job

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Hello there,      This is activity was a bit hard I guess. But I commend you for doing your best. See you later! If you have questions, just fell free to ask me. -T.Verna-   Hi Verna >>CorrectHow are you? >>CorrectI was confused to doing home work.>>I was confused when I was doing my homework.1. Heavy smoking and to overeat are activities which a heart patient must forego.B. Smoking heavily and to overeat >>D. Heavy smoking and overeating   2. In the smaller towns of Wisconsin, where one can quickly walk to the greening hills of Spring. D. , one can quickly walk >>A. , where one can quickly walk 3. Coach Jones is a remarkable physical specimen: although sixty, he is as vigorous as ever.D. as vigorous as ever, he is sixty years of age. >>E. he is as vigorous as ever; however he is sixty. 4. The swashbuckling hero was without moral convictions, acceptable manners, and he had littleelse in his favor.E. without much else in his favor, including moral convictions and acceptable manners. >>A. without moral convictions, acceptable manners, and he had little else in his favor. 5. One method of ending discrimination in business and industry is to demand quotas to be met by employers.E. that of demanding employers to meet quotas. >>D. that employers be demanded to meet quotas. 6. Mr. [Name]\'s recommendation was believed to be sufficient and that it would guarantee my getting a job.E. to guarantee my getting a job >>A. and that it would guarantee my getting a job.  

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