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2011-12-07 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi Verna It' sunny, but it's cold today. I never feel my foot's sensation. A heavy-snowfall watch has been issued in our country. 1. The children were playing outside. 2. The dog was barking at us. 3. My teacher was explaining the exercise to me. 4. I was listening to my mp3 player. 5. Those people were walking towards the library. 6. The cook was preparing a tasty meal. 7. I were trying to fix my computer. 8. My friend and I were playing basketball. 9. The police officers were chasing the thief. 10. My sister and my brother were singing.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],         You\'ve got an almost perfect homework. It\'s impressive. Keep up the great work! See you later! -T.Verna-   Hi Verna! >>CorrectIt\' sunny, but it\'s cold today. >>CorrectI never feel my foot\'s sensation. >>I can feel anything in my foot.A heavy-snowfall watch has been issued in our country.>>A heavy-snow fall watch has been an issue in our country.1. The children were playing outside. >>Correct2. The dog was barking at us. >>Correct3. My teacher was explaining the exercise to me. >>Correct4. I was listening to my mp3 player. >>Correct5. Those people were walking towards the library. >>Correct6. The cook was preparing a tasty meal. >>Correct7. I were trying to fix my computer. >> I was trying to fix my computer.8. My friend and I were playing basketball. >>Correct9. The police officers were chasing the thief.>>Correct 10. My sister and my brother were singing. >>Correct  

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