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학생이 쓴 원문
My work give me positive effect
For example i can earn the money,so i can have english speaking class ,also i can eat delious snack and buy Wonderful clothes
I can have social reputation and human connecting through my work
Thank you teacher,have a nice day
강사 첨삭
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My work give me positive effect
>>> My work has a positive effect on me.
For example i can earn the money,so i can have english speaking class ,also i can eat delious snack and buy Wonderful clothes
>>> For example, I can earn money so I can have English speaking classes. Also, I can eat delicious snacks and buy wonderful clothes.
I can have social reputation and human connecting through my work
>>> I can have a social reputation and connect with people through my work.
Thank you teacher,have a nice day
>>> Thank you, teacher, have a nice day.
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