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2019-12-02 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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I prefer to watch sports at home because i feel comfortable and feel calm Also As soon as watching tv finished,i can do any another things

강사 첨삭

Hey, [이름] [이름]. Thank you for sharing your opinion on the homework topic. By writing, you can also express your thoughts and practice making sentences.^^ I appreciate it very much. Have a good one. ~ teacher Jane c\",) 


I prefer to watch sports at home because i feel comfortable and feel calm
>>> I prefer watching sports at home because I feel comfortable and calm. 

Also As soon as watching tv finished,i can do any another things
>>> Also, as soon as I finish watching TV, I can do other things. 

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