HW
학생이 쓴 원문
Essay: Some people wish they could live in warm climates all year round. These places get very hot during certain months of the year. In fact studies show that heat can lead to greater crime. Do you think that people in warm climates lead happier lives or not?
Actually, I prefer warm climates because there are more things that I can do than in cold climates. And I feel happy and peaceful when the weather is nice. However, if the weather is always warm, I will get used to it. So I wouldn\'t feel grateful for the good weather.
For example, I wasn\'t thankful for a fine-dust free day in the past. But I am tankful for a that day because fine-dust blows from China on warm days. Since factories in Wuhan stopped, the weather has been nice in our country. I think this is the only good part because of corona virus.
If you don\'t mind, as I said, give me a TOEIC speaking questions please~.
강사 첨삭
Hi Bo [이름],
Thanks for the reminder. I do remember your request, and that is just what I did:) Actually, the question I gave you was taken from a sample mock test for TOEIC Speaking. You can check this website https://www.englishclub.com/esl-exams/ets-toeic-practice-speaking.htm. I just removed the part that says, \"State your opinion and provide reasons for your view\", so perhaps that\'s why the question doesn\'t appear like it is a TOEIC speaking question. ^ ^ Thank you still for responding to the homework given to you.
-Rachel
Actually, I prefer warm climates because there are more things that I can do than in cold climates. And I feel happy and peaceful when the weather is nice. However, if the weather is always warm, I will get used to it. So I wouldn\'t feel grateful for the good weather.
>> correct (awesome sentences)
For example, I wasn\'t thankful for a fine-dust free day in the past. But I am tankful for a that day because fine-dust blows from China on warm days. Since factories in Wuhan stopped, the weather has been nice in our country. I think this is the only good part because of corona virus.
>> For example, I wasn\'t always grateful for a fine-dust free day in the past because it was normal for us to experience being surrounded by fine dust blown to our country from China on warm days. However, now I feel more appreciative of the fine-dust free weather since factories in Wuhan stopped their operation. This led to the decrease in the amount of air pollutants.
I think this is the only good part because of corona virus.
>> correct
>> I think this is the only benefit we get from the corona virus.
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