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There are 3 ways how to that I am managing to situation of NCov. Firstly, I am trying to stay home almost of the time. In my opinion, this is the most important to protect to ourselves. Second, I take mask all the time when I go out from my home. It can make possible to going out and meeting people. Last one is that I bought many food and kept in my home. There are many food in supermarket still now. However, nobody can sure that we can get food from market whenever we want. Plus, I will go back to Korea if Corona virus is getting serious at this place.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jay!
It\'s nice to read your work again.
Always be careful of countable and uncountable nouns.
You also have to focus on modifiers.
The structure of your sentences is pretty solid so you just have to maintain that.
Refer to the corrections below.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
There are 3 ways how to that I am managing to situation of NCov.
>> There are 3 ways on how I am managing in the situation of NCov.
Firstly, I am trying to stay home almost of the time.
>> Firstly, I am trying to stay home almost all of the time.
In my opinion, this is the most important to protect to ourselves.
>> In my opinion, this is the most important way to protect to ourselves.
Second, I take mask all the time when I go out from my home.
>> Second, I wear a mask all the time when I go out from my home.
It can make possible to going out and meeting people.
>> This would make it possible for me to go out and meet people.
Last one is that I bought many food and kept in my home.
>> The last one is that I bought a lot of food and stored everything in my home.
There are many food in supermarket still now.
>> There are a lot of food in the supermarket until now.
However, nobody can sure that we can get food from market whenever we want.
>> However, nobody can be sure that we can get food from the market whenever we want.
Plus, I will go back to Korea if Corona virus is getting serious at this place.
>> Plus, I will go back to Korea if the Corona virus would get more serious at this place.
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