HW
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
Describe one of your favorite songs or one of your favorite movies. Answer in 5 sentences or more.
The name of one of my favorite movies is \'White Chicks\'.
I\'ve watched it more than 5times. This is because when I watched it first time, I laughed a lot and could relieve my stress.
So, I decided to recommend to people around me and watched it with my friends and cousins.
I want to recommend to watch this movie to you If you have time.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
Good afternoon!
Thanks for your effort doing homework!:) Yes?I will watch it later:)
The name of one of my favorite movies is \'White Chicks\'.
>>>The title of one of my favorite of movies is \"White Chicks\"
I\'ve watched it more than 5times. This is because when I watched it first time, I laughed a lot and could relieve my stress.
I\'ve watched it more than 5times. This is because when I watched it first time, I laughed a lot and could relieve my stress.
>>> I\'ve watched it more than 5 times. This is because when I watched it at the first time, I laughed a lot and could relieve my stress.
So, I decided to recommend to people around me and watched it with my friends and cousins.
So, I decided to recommend to people around me and watched it with my friends and cousins.
>>> CORRECT
I want to recommend to watch this movie to you If you have time.
I want to recommend to watch this movie to you If you have time.
>>>I want to recommend it to you watch this if you have time.
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