HW
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
Should mobile phones be forbidden in some places? Answer in 6 sentences or more.
I agree with this statement. There are several reasons to support my opinion.
There are some places where need to be quite like library or class.
In that places, It\'s better to not disturb others because lots of people usually study or read books.
In my experience, when I was a high school student the mobile phones was forbidden in the class. So, I could concentrate to my study without any phone ringing.
For these reasons, I think It\'s better to be forbidden in some places.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
This is an awesome response to the homework you were given.
Sincerely
T. James
I agree with this statement.
>>> CORRECT
There are several reasons to support my opinion.
>>> CORRECT
There are some places where need to be quite like library or class.
There are some places where need to be quite like library or class.
>>> There are some places that we need to be quite like a library or in a class.
In that places, It\'s better to not disturb others because lots of people usually study or read books.
In that places, It\'s better to not disturb others because lots of people usually study or read books.
>>> In that place, It\'s better don\'t disturb others because lots of people usually study or read books.
In my experience, when I was a high school student mobile phones was forbidden in the class.
In my experience, when I was a high school student mobile phones was forbidden in the class.
>>> CORRECT
>>OR: Based on my experience, when I was a high school student mobile phones was forbidden in the classroom.
So, I could concentrate to my study without any phone ringing.
>>> So, I can concentrate to study without any phone ringing.
For these reasons, I think It\'s better to be forbidden in some places.
For these reasons, I think It\'s better to be forbidden in some places.
>>> CORRECT
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