HW: Can you think of a device that would make people\'s life easier?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the IoT(Internet of things) devices are very useful. We think we can get information about various activities such as weather, news, and powering on TV by using these electronic devices. These electronic devices actually made my life more convenient.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Hazel! :)
Thank you for doing your very first homework. :)
I agree with your ideas and your sentences were great!
Keep it up!
- T. Rina ^^
1. I think the IoT(Internet of things) devices are very useful.
>> CORRECT!
2. We think we can get information about various activities such as weather, news, and powering on TV by using these electronic devices.
>> CORRECT!
3. These electronic devices actually made my life more convenient.
>> CORRECT!
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