HW: Describe a successful person.
학생이 쓴 원문
A successful person is very polite. And She(He) has a positive mind and doesn\'t give up. So I always try not to give up when I have a hard time of my life. Lastly, Successful person is considerate of other.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Hazel! :)
Thank you for this.
- T. Rina ^^
1. A successful person is very polite.
>> CORRECT!
2. And She(He) has a positive mind and doesn\'t give up.
>> CORRECT!
3. So I always try not to give up when I have a hard time of my life.
>> So, I always try not to give up when I have a hard time.
OR: So, I always try not to give up when I face difficulties.
OR: So, I always try not to give up when there is a problem in my life.
4. Lastly, Successful person is considerate of other.
>> Lastly, a successful person is considerate towards others.
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