HW&diary
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
1. To "pack off" means to 'put away'
2. A "pain in the neck" means something is "difficult to see'
a. unusual
b. bothersome
c. difficult to see
3. To "pair off" means to 'put two things together'
4. If it is "par for the course", it is' very good.'
5''. To "part with" means to 'belong to'
Yesterday, Semaster was opend~!. I was so excited to go to the school. I don't know about the reason I felt it. Anyway, I knew one thing I very fit to school life than vacation. Last few weeks, I was so depresssed. But yesterday, I was so energetic that I smiled all of days.
I become to thank that there are what I should do and friends who feel sympathy. I felt I'm alive.
I look forward to the things in front of me. What makes me embarrased? What makes me frustrated? I'm happy to expect them.
강사 첨삭
IMPRESSIVE! I love you spirit, Steve! You should think about positive things often. Don\'t let depression and frustration or disappointments let your guard down. We all experience pains in life but the only thing that we need to do is to expect them so that we will not be hurt that hard. Have fun to go to school always! Explore the world while you are young! I am doing what I am telling you now just so you know. I\'ll see you in class!
--Teacher Leny--
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:1. To \"pack off\" means to \'put away\'
>>>Correct!2. A \"pain in the neck\" means something is \"difficult to see\'a. unusualb. bothersomec. difficult to see
>>>Correct!3. To \"pair off\" means to \'put two things together\'
>>>Correct!4. If it is \"par for the course\", it is\' very good.\'
>>>Correct!5\'\'. To \"part with\" means to \'belong to\'
>>>Correct!Yesterday, Semaster was opend~!.
>>>The second semester opened yesterday.
>>>Yesterday, second semester started.
I was so excited to go to the school.
>>>Correct!
I don\'t know about the reason I felt it.
>>>I didn\'t know the reason why I felt that way.
Anyway, I knew one thing I very fit to school life than vacation.
>>>Anyway, I know one reason why. I am fit to school life than having vacation.
Last few weeks, I was so depresssed.
>>>During the last few weeks, I am depressed.
But yesterday, I was so energetic that I smiled all of days.
>>>But yesterday, I was so energetic that I smiled all day. Become to thank that there are what I should do and friends who feel sympathy.
>>>I am so thankful because there are things that I should do and there are friends who feel sympathy.
I felt I\'m alive.
>>>Correct!I look forward to the things in front of me.
>>>Correct!
>>>I look forward to the things that will happen in my life in the future.
What makes me embarrased? What makes me frustrated? I\'m happy to expect them.
>>>Correct!
>>>There will be things that will embarrass and frustrate me but I am happy to expect them.
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