HW&DIary
학생이 쓴 원문
Tony took his driving test again, and passed with flying colours so he can get his licence at last.
1. The acronym FIFA stands for Federation IInternational de Football Association.
2. FIFA was founded in Paris on May 21st, 1904
3. The FIFA World Cup is the world's largest single-sport event.
4. Except during the war years, the World Cup event has taken place every four years since 1930.
5. No other sports event of the modern era has won the popularity of the World Cup.
Yesterday, The typhoon "BOLAVEN" was comming to the south KOREA. Maybe, A most of writings in this website would say about same things. ..kk
But I'm so dissapointed. because any of acident was not found in front of my eyes. There are just staggered trees. Except it, Nothing happend despite of my earnest anticipation which may makes my routinary life exciting.
강사 첨삭
Oh my gosh, Steve! Meaning you expected something huge to happen, right? Something that will change your life forever.kkk But, sorry Typhoon Bolaven did not stay in your country that long so there were no huge damages. Good thing! You should rather be thankful that almost all people are safe and sound. Thank you for your diary and congratulations with your homework! See you tomorrow!
~Teacher Leny~
Here are my corrections for you:
Tony took his driving test again, and passed with flying colours so he can get his licence at last.>>>Correct11. The acronym FIFA stands for Federation IInternational de Football Association.
>>>Correct!2. FIFA was founded in Paris on May 21st, 1904
>>>Correct!3. The FIFA World Cup is the world\'s largest single-sport event.
>>>Correct!4. Except during the war years, the World Cup event has taken place every four years since 1930.
>>>Correct!5. No other sports event of the modern era has won the popularity of the World Cup.
>>>Correct!Yesterday, The typhoon \"BOLAVEN\" was comming to the south KOREA.
>>>Yesterday,Typhoon Bolaven came to South Korea.
>>>Yesterday, Typhoon Bolaven came across our country.
Maybe, A most of writings in this website would say about same things. ..kk
>>>Maybe most of the essays and writings from the students have the same topic.
>>>Maybe most of the writings that will be uploaded in this website are about the typhoon.But I\'m so dissapointed. because any of acident was not found in front of my eyes.
>>>But I am disappointed because I didn\'t see any accident during that time.
There are just staggered trees.
>>>There were just trees that fell down to the ground.
Except it, Nothing happend despite of my earnest anticipation which may makes my routinary life exciting.
>>>Except the fallen trees, there are no other exciting events that happen. I was anticipating something that will change my routinary life.
>>>I was anticipating something that will make my life exciting but nothing happened.
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