[HW & Diary] Adverbs of degree

2015-02-10 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

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1. Sean lives a very quite stressful life. 2. Equador is a very really great country. 3. The Serrano Towers in Valencia are absolutely pretty high. 4. Samantha is a completely highly skilled computer technician. 5. Victoria, in my opinion, is highly completely mad. This is my diary because I don't want to waste this remaining space. I also have a LASEK surgery on this Saturday. I am a little bit nervous because my roommate who got a LASIK surgery last Friday scared me. And my advisor recommended me to write a paper which should be submitted by tomorrow. A page limitation is relatively small, just 4 pages. However, it also needs time and efforts. Anyway, I have to go an academy early in the morning tomorrow. So, I've got to finish this diary. p.s. I don't know when I stop this diary :D

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Jin Woong! Thank you for your composition. It\'s a smart thing for you to include your diary in your homework. I appreciate your effort and initiative in doing so, and I want you to know that I\'m happy to receive this kind of writing from you. Take care and enjoy your class!T. JanE ^^ 1. Sean lives a very quite stressful life.>> Sean lives a _very_ stressful life. 2. Equador is a very really great country.>> Equador is a _really_ great country. 3. The Serrano Towers in Valencia are absolutely pretty high.>> The Serrano Towers in Valencia are _pretty_ high. 4. Samantha is a completely highly skilled computer technician.>> Samantha is a _highly_ skilled computer technician. 5. Victoria, in my opinion, is highly completely mad.>> Victoria, in my opinion, is _completely_ mad. This is my diary because I don\'t want to waste this remaining space.>> Correct I also have a LASEK surgery on this Saturday.>> I will also have LASIK surgery this Saturday. I am a little bit nervous because my roommate who got a LASIK surgery last Friday scared me.>> Correct And my advisor recommended me to write a paper which should be submitted by tomorrow.>> Correct A page limitation is relatively small, just 4 pages.>> The minimum page is relatively few since he\'s requiring just four pages. However, it also needs time and efforts.>> Correct Anyway, I have to go an academy early in the morning tomorrow.>> Anyway, I have to go to an academy early in the morning tomorrow. So, I\'ve got to finish this diary.>> Correct p.s. I don\'t know when I stop this diary :D >> I don\'t know how to end this diary. 

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