HW: Do you agree or disagree? Social networks are killing sincere relationships.
학생이 쓴 원문
I agree. Because excessive social network formation harms the relationship in the formation of real human relationships. On the other hand, however, there are many people who make friends on SNS and meet and marry through SNS. It is equally dangerous to indulge too much in one field in all areas.
강사 첨삭
Happy Thursday, Hazel. :)
Great sentences and outstanding vocabulary again.
Keep it up! ^^
- T. Rina
- T. Rina
1. I agree.
>> CORRECT!
2. Because excessive social network formation harms the relationship in the formation of real human relationships.
>> CORRECT!
3. On the other hand, however, there are many people who make friends on SNS and meet and marry through SNS.
>> CORRECT!
4. It is equally dangerous to indulge too much in one field in all areas.
>> CORRECT!
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