HW : Do you agree or disagree? Why? To encourage healthy eating, higher taxes should be imposed on s

2020-06-09 · 첨삭 강사 Rina

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I disagree with this opinion. Refrain from junk food is a good thing, but I don\'t think it\'s right to force taxes to keep people from eating. If taxes are forced to be raised, people\'s resistance will also grow, and junk food will not necessarily lead to a deterioration in health.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Hazel. ^^
Wow! You have used good vocabulary and constructed great sentences.

Thank you for this.

See you tomorrow! ^^

- T. Rina

1. I disagree with this opinion.
>> CORRECT!

2. Refrain from junk food is a good thing, but I don\'t think it\'s right to force taxes to keep people from eating.

>> CORRECT!

3. If taxes are forced to be raised, people\'s resistance will also grow, and junk food will not necessarily lead to a deterioration in health.

>> CORRECT!

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