HW: Do you set goals to improve yourself? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I always tend to record what I have to do. You can easily see the deadline at a glance while organizing your work on your notes, and you can work on a planned basis. If you improvise without a plan, you often rush to the deadline. So I organize what I have to do while making plans.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Hazel. :)
Great sentences. I always think that you are an organized person. :)
Thank you for this.
- T. Rina
1. I always tend to record what I have to do.
>> CORRECT!
2. You can easily see the deadline at a glance while organizing your work on your notes, and you can work on a planned basis.
>> CORRECT!
3. If you improvise without a plan, you often rush to the deadline.
>> CORRECT!
OR: If you improvise without a plan, you often rush to meet the deadline.
4. So I organize what I have to do while making plans.
>> CORRECT!
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