HW: Do you think diets are useful or not? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think diet control is a great help in keeping the body healthy.
But it is never recommended that you do nothing but control your diet! This behavior is not good for your health because it is a muscle-reducing action, not losing fat.
Therefore, I think we should exercise together with proper diet. I think we should keep our weight steady because obesity and overweight can cause various diseases to come.
Even for skinny people, I think it\'s important to measure the amount of muscle and maintain the right amount of muscle in your body.
(I recently took a life science class, so I explained it in detail.)
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Hazel! ^^
I think I agree with you. Some people even think that not eating any food will make them lose weight, or only fat people should go on a diet.
You really make great sentences.
I am so proud of you, dear.
Keep it up!
- T. Rina
1. I think diet control is a great help in keeping the body healthy.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
2. But it is never recommended that you do nothing but control your diet!
>> CORRECT!
3. This behavior is not good for your health because it is a muscle-reducing action, not losing fat.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
4. Therefore, I think we should exercise together with proper diet.
>> CORRECT!
5. I think we should keep our weight steady because obesity and overweight can cause various diseases to come.
>> I think we should keep our weight steady because obesity and being overweight can cause various diseases to come.
>> I think we should keep our weight steady because obesity and being overweight can cause various diseases to come.
6. Even for skinny people, I think it\'s important to measure the amount of muscle and maintain the right amount of muscle in your body.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
7. I recently took a life science class, so I explained it in detail.
>> CORRECT!
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