HW for today

2013-04-02 · 첨삭 강사 Sheela

학생이 쓴 원문

1. We discovered that there were bones lying in the gulch. 2. A small group gathered at the beach where the storm had hit. 3. Were you hurt? 4. What were they doing? 5. We're not sure about our plans for tomorrow. I think that I talked unimportant things about the movie in our today's class. because I mostly mentioned the number of times. I wandered away from the subject. but I don't prefer to watch the movie. So the fact that I saw it three times is surprising haha. For tomorrow's class, I am going to prepare the story line and character of this movie. see you.

강사 첨삭

Good Evening Jo!!! You made my evening so happy! I am also surprice that you\'ve watched that movie for three times :). Well, maybe the movie is related to your story. Anway, I really want to know the story of that movie. See you tommorrow! t. Sheela 1. We discovered that there were bones lying in the gulch. >>Correct!2. A small group gathered at the beach where the storm had hit. >>Correct!3. Were you hurt? >>Correct!4. What were they doing? >>Correct!5. We\'re not sure about our plans for tomorrow. >>Correct!I think that I talked unimportant things about the movie in our today\'s class. >>I think I talked about the unimportant things about the movie in our  class today.because I mostly mentioned the number of times. >>Because I mostly mentioned the number of times I have watched the movie. I wandered away from the subject. But I don\'t prefer to watch the movie. >>Correct! So the fact that I saw it three times is surprising haha. >>Corrrect! For tomorrow\'s class, I am going to prepare the story line and character of this movie. see you. >>Corrrect!

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