HW for today
학생이 쓴 원문
My most meaningful achievements and how they relate to your future goals.
I couldn't remember meaningful achievements very well.
Actually, the most meaningful achivement to me is the fact that I entered the university. Because I wished it eagerly. But it was not related to any other goals or results. 'failures' are the most influencing factor in most of my life so that failures contribute to good result after all. Experiencing failure teach me whether ways are good or not. So I could modify my ways gradually. For example, I failed to enter the exam of university at first. Then, I changed the way of study and my mind so that I succeeded in getting a place at university.
강사 첨삭
They always say that we learn from our mistake and you are one of the people that proves this right. I am happy that you don\'t give up easily, intead you are being more challenge when you fail. That for me is a good personality. See you!
T. SHeela
My most meaningful achievements and how they relate to your future goals.>>My most meaninful achievements and how they relate to my future goals are...I couldn\'t remember meaningful achievements very well.
>>I couldn\'t remember the meaningful achievement I had.Actually, the most meaningful achivement to me is the fact that I entered the university.
>>Actually, the most meaninful achievement for me is the fact that I entered the university.
Because I wished it eagerly.
>>Because I have wished for it eagerly.
But it was not related to any other goals or results.
>> Correct!
\'failures\' are the most influencing factor in most of my life so that failures contribute to good result after all.
>> Failures are the most influencing factor in most of my life so failures contributed good result after all
Experiencing failure teach me whether ways are good or not.
>>Experiencing failures taught me which way is good or not.
So I could modify my ways gradually.
>>Correct!
For example, I failed to enter the exam of university at first.
>>For example, I first failed to enter the exam at the University.
Then, I changed the way of study and my mind so that I succeeded in getting a place at university.
>>Then, I changed the way I studied and my mind set so that I can succeed in getting a place at the University.
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