HW for today
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A teller works in a bank and helps customers with their banking needs. The area where they work is called a teller (windshield) because there is usually a plate of glass between the customer and the teller. Some of the things a teller can help you with include (taking) a check, telling you how much money you have in your (account), processing deposits and (withdrawals), etc. These days, tellers are not as (necessary) as they used to be, since many people do their banking (online) ( = on the internet). In fact, some banks actually (charge) you more money to speak to a real person! Since tellers (handle) a lot of money as part of their job, they are required to be (trustworthy). A teller should also have a strong attention to (detail).
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Hi there, Jo!
Thank you for your composition today! You are a very responsible student! Keep it up! Take care and have a nice day!
T. JanE ^^
A teller works in a bank and helps customers with their banking needs. The area where they work is called a teller (windshield) because there is usually a plate of glass between the customer and the teller.
>> A teller works in a bank and helps customers with their banking needs. The area where they work is called a teller (window) because there is usually a plate of glass between the customer and the teller.
Some of the things a teller can help you with include (taking) a check, telling you how much money you have in your (account), processing deposits and (withdrawals), etc.
>> Some of the things a teller can help you with include (cashing) a check, telling you how much money you have in your (account), processing deposits and (withdrawals), etc.
These days, tellers are not as (necessary) as they used to be, since many people do their banking (online) ( = on the internet).
>> Correct
In fact, some banks actually (charge) you more money to speak to a real person!
>> Correct
Since tellers (handle) a lot of money as part of their job, they are required to be (trustworthy).
>> Correct
A teller should also have a strong attention to (detail).
>> Correct
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