HW for today

2013-06-18 · 첨삭 강사 Jane

학생이 쓴 원문

I wrote down some sentence concerning each questioning. 1. Exhaust fumes cause a lot of _pollution_, especially in big cities. Exhaust fumes leads to smog. Here in Seoul, we are covered by a full of smog. This causes various repiratory disease. 2. Everyone should learn to _conserve__ ( = save) energy. Using lights/lamps only when needed is a good way to do this. the amount of electricity consumed continue to rise yearly. I think that it result in the blackout. 3. Nancy is _concerned_ about pollution. This is why she walks to work instead of driving. 4. _Biking_ is much healthier than driving, and it doesn't pollute the air. To encourage to use bicycle and walk, our goverment has made the road specially designed for walkers and bicycle riders. 5. David conserves water by not letting it _run_ when he's not using it.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Jo! Thank you for your composition! You did a great job of writing sentences related with the homework. Keep it up! Take care and have a good day! T. JanE ^^ I wrote down some sentence concerning each questioning.>> I wrote down some sentences related with each question.1. Exhaust fumes cause a lot of _pollution_, especially in big cities.>> Correct Exhaust fumes leads to smog. >> Exhaust fumes lead to smog. Here in Seoul, we are covered by a full of smog. >> Seoul is covered with smog. This causes various repiratory disease. >> This causes various respiratory diseases.2. Everyone should learn to _conserve__ ( = save) energy. >> Correct Using lights/lamps only when needed is a good way to do this.>> Correct The amount of electricity consumed continue to rise yearly. >> The amount of electricity comsumed continues to rise yearly. I think that it result in the blackout.>> I think that this has resulted to blackout.3. Nancy is _concerned_ about pollution. This is why she walks to work instead of driving.>> Correct 4. _Biking_ is much healthier than driving, and it doesn\'t pollute the air.>> Correct To encourage to use bicycle and walk, our goverment has made the road specially designed for walkers and bicycle riders.>> To encourage people to walk or use a bike, our government has made a road specially designed for walkers and bicycle riders.5. David conserves water by not letting it _run_ when he\'s not using it. >> Correct

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