Hw> How can traveling be educational?
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To make traveling be educational but not boring, I think trying to apply the programs or activities that I can enjoy only in that area is important. These days, many programs that are suitable to each person\'s interest are developed. For example, if someone is interested in learning how to cook that country\'s food, he can apply the local cooking class which let him experience to cook traditional home dishes at teacher\'s house, using the ingredients bought in local market. Or if someone wants to learn the history of the country, she can request the program that involves a guide who knows language and history well before she go to the museum. I think walking around the street makes people excited but joining some programs also helps people to really know about that culture and people and this is a real education.
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Hello Ella. Thank you for this. This sounds fun! I have seen those programs in a TV show I watched about traveling. Some tourism agencies in some countries offer these kinds of programs.
- T. Beth
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To make traveling be educational but not boring, I think trying to apply the programs or activities that I can enjoy only in that area is important. >>> correct.
>> OR: To make traveling educational but not boring, I think trying to apply the programs or activities that I can enjoy only in that area is important.
These days, many programs that are suitable to each person\'s interest are developed.
>>> correct
For example, if someone is interested in learning how to cook that country\'s food, he can apply the local cooking class which let him experience to cook traditional home dishes at teacher\'s house, using the ingredients bought in local market.
>>> For example, if someone is interested in learning how to cook that country\'s food, he can apply for the local cooking class which lets him experience how to cook traditional home dishes at the teacher\'s house using the ingredients bought in the local market.
Or if someone wants to learn the history of the country, she can request the program that involves a guide who knows language and history well before she go to the museum.
>>> Or if someone wants to learn the history of the country, she can request a program that involves a guide who knows the language and history well before she goes to the museum.
I think walking around the street makes people excited but joining some programs also helps people to really know about that culture and people and this is a real education.
>>> correct
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