[HW]How do you handle conflicts or disagreements with friends?
학생이 쓴 원문
I have an experience of having conflict with my friends because of the tendency. Unlike me who needs time alone, my friends want to do everything together. At first I tried to adjust but as it repeated couple of times, I decied to discuss about it. We had long, deep conversation and after the talk, we can respect each other. So I usually have a talk about the issue when I have to handle the conflict.
But if the sincere talk does not work-actually it always worked- I may consider the compromise point that my friends and I can both satisfy.
강사 첨삭
Reading your answer helps me understand the kind of friend you are, Linda! Keep writing inspiring experiences.-Faith-
I have an experience of having conflict with my friends because of the tendency. >> I have experienced conflicts with my friends because of certain tendencies.
Unlike me who needs time alone, my friends want to do everything together.
>> Unlike me, who needs time alone, my friends prefer to do everything together.
At first I tried to adjust but as it repeated couple of times, I decied to discuss about it.
>> At first, I tried to adjust, but as it happened a couple of times, I decided to discuss it.
We had long, deep conversation and after the talk, we can respect each other.
>> We had a long, deep conversation, and after the talk, we were able to respect each other.
So I usually have a talk about the issue when I have to handle the conflict.
>> Therefore, I usually discuss the issue when I need to handle a conflict.
But if the sincere talk does not work-actually it always worked- I may consider the compromise point that my friends and I can both satisfy.
>> But if a sincere conversation does not work—though it usually does—I may consider a compromise that satisfies both my friends and me.
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