Hw> How do you think transportation will change in the future (Let\'s say, 50 years from now.)?

2020-09-22 · 첨삭 강사 Beth

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I think transportation will change of course, but the changes of public transportation will be very noticeable in the future. And I think two important changes of public transportation would happen. First of all, in the post-COVID world, a demand for public transportation would be not what it used to be. As telecommuting working out of home has been activated and the virus spread through public the transportation , I have seen a lot of buses and subway were closed and people use their cars instead. I think this phenomenon will reduce the use of public transportation in the future too. Secondly, the customized public transportation will be developed. The technology keeps improving, so it can realize the customized public transportation and we can reduce the waste of time and money for persisting in fixed route. In Korea, \"mobility on demand\" is running like Kakao taxi or KST mobility which is running for the demand of customer. I think these kinds of things will be popularized.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ella. Thank you once again for this. Transportation will definitely be more convenient in the future with these changes.
- T. Beth
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I think transportation will change of course, but the changes of public transportation will be very noticeable in the future. 
>>> correct    
And I think two important changes of public transportation would happen.
>>> correct    
First of all, in the post-COVID world, a demand for public transportation would be not what it used to be. 
>>> First of all, in the post-COVID world, a demand for public transportation would not be what it used to be. 
As telecommuting working out of home has been activated and the virus spread through public the transportation , I have seen a lot of buses and subway were closed and people use their cars instead. 
>>> As telecommuting working out of home has been activated and the virus has spread through public transportation, I have seen a lot of buses and subway closed and people use their cars instead.     
I think this phenomenon will reduce the use of public transportation in the future too.
>>>  correct   
Secondly, the customized public transportation will be developed. 
>>>  correct   
The technology keeps improving, so it can realize the customized public transportation and we can reduce the waste of time and money for persisting in fixed route. 
>>> The technology keeps improving, so it can develop customized public transportation and we can reduce the waste of time and money for persisting in fixed route.     
In Korea, \"mobility on demand\" is running like Kakao taxi or KST mobility which is running for the demand of customer. 
>>> In Korea, \"mobility on demand\" is running like Kakao taxi or KST mobility which is running due to the demand of customers.    
I think these kinds of things will be popularized.
>>>   correct  

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