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How important freedom is for people? What does make human beings different with other creatures? Freedom is one of the things that divide human with other animals. They follow their masters well once their masters feed them, take care of them, and train them as pets. However, human is different. Meals, houses, or clothes can't make people to throw up their freedom that is their right to live freely with their own will. A state or country is a entity that guarantees people's freedom, and quality of their lives. Basically, people have individual, and selfish characteristic. So it's not easy to live as accomplishing each of their desires. That's the seed that drive people to build some of states or countries that play important roles for people who live in there to do what they want to do with independence from any other influence. That's why Korean people had stuck together when Japan had colonized Korea about 100 years ago, and had done patriotic actions like civil demonstrations.

 

Good Morning!

Thank you for your composition. Your ancestors fought for your independence from Japanese people and I think it is high time to move on.

Anyway, I hope that both of our countries will always be independent. See you!

T. Grace^^

How important freedom is for people? What does make human beings different with other creatures?

 Freedom is one of the things that divide human with other animals. 

>>Freedom is one of the things that divide human from other animals.

>>OR: Freedom is one of the things that separates human from the other animals.

They follow their masters well once their masters feed them, take care of them, and train them as pets.

>> Correct!

However, human is different.

>>Correct!

Meals, houses, or clothes can\'t make people to throw up their freedom that is their right to live freely with their own will.

>>Meals, houses and clothes can\'t make people throw away their freedom and it is their right to live on their own will.

A state or country is a entity that guarantees people\'s freedom, and quality of their lives.

>> A state or a country is an entity that guarantees people\'s freedom and quality life of living. 

Basically, people have individual, and selfish characteristic.

>>Basically, people are individuals who have selfish characteristics.

So it\'s not easy to live as accomplishing each of their desires.

>>So, it\'s not easy to live life just by accomplishing their desire.

That\'s the seed that drive people to build some of states or countries that play important roles for people who live in there to do what they want to do with independence from any other influence.

>>That\'s the seed that drive people to build some states or countries that play important roles for the people who want to live their life independently and be away from any other influences. 

That\'s why Korean people had stuck together when Japan had colonized Korea about 100 years ago, and had done patriotic actions like civil demonstrations.

>>That\'s why Korean people are stuck with Japan ever since Japan colonized Korea 100 years ago. They have done patriotic actions like civil demonstrations.