Hw> How much and what was the most expensive meal you\'ve had? Was it worth it?
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The most expensive meal I\'ve remembered was when I treat my dad big because I first got the part time pay. I chose Outback Steak House, which is well-known for delicious steak and pastas, because I went there with my teacher and friends three years ago and it was one of the best dinner I\'ve ever had! So I went to Outback with my dad confidently and ordered Steak which the worker had recommended, other foods and drinks. We were satisfied with food at first, but that didn\'t last long. The reason was that the food was too much for 2 people and steak and pasta was greasy, so it was not easy to eat a lot. And the receipt made me more unpleasant. I think the price was about 120 dollars. For me, if the expensive meal is worthy and reasonable, I will be full with pleasant. But that meal wasn\'t that worth. We weren\'t satisfied with that meal, but we console with the fact that we had a new experience. I wish next time, I would be satisfied with worthy and expensive food!
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Hello Ella. Thank you for this. Wow, 200 dollars for a meal you didn\'t fully enjoy. But at least, the experience was worth it.
- T. Beth
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The most expensive meal I\'ve remembered was when I treat my dad big because I first got the part time pay. >>> The most expensive meal I remembered was when I treated my dad big because I got the first part time pay.
I chose Outback Steak House, which is well-known for delicious steak and pastas, because I went there with my teacher and friends three years ago and it was one of the best dinner I\'ve ever had!
>>> correct
So I went to Outback with my dad confidently and ordered Steak which the worker had recommended, other foods and drinks.
>>> correct
We were satisfied with food at first, but that didn\'t last long.
>>> We were satisfied with the food at first, but that didn\'t last long.
The reason was that the food was too much for 2 people and steak and pasta was greasy, so it was not easy to eat a lot.
>>> The reason was that the food was too much for 2 people and the steak and pasta were too greasy, so it was not easy to eat a lot.
And the receipt made me more unpleasant.
>>> correct
I think the price was about 120 dollars.
>>> correct
For me, if the expensive meal is worthy and reasonable, I will be full with pleasant.
>>> For me, if the expensive meal is worthy and reasonable, I will be full with pleasure.
But that meal wasn\'t that worth.
>>> But the meal was not worth it.
We weren\'t satisfied with that meal, but we console with the fact that we had a new experience.
>>> We weren\'t satisfied with that meal, but we were console with the fact that we had a new experience.
I wish next time, I would be satisfied with worthy and expensive food!
>>> I wish next time, I would be satisfied with good quality and expensive food!
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