HW) How would you describe a perfect weekend? (If you could have it your way, what is an ideal weeke
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For me, an ideal weekend is full of some qualitative analogue activities. Of course, I don\'t deny the fact that I sometimes need to relax by doing nothing or using smart phones especially when I had hard weekdays. But I usually watch endless Youtube videos or binge Netflix because of laziness or self-justification. And about Sunday evening, I feel emptiness, asking myself \"WHERE IS MY WEEKEND??\". Then I am stressed and tired and that doesn\'t make me feel really refreshed. Therefore, the first, important thing for my ideal weekends is to stay away from my smartphone.(It is still so hard but I am trying) And in order to replace smartphone and have some fun, I cook for my family or just myself, read some books with a high concentration, go around the neighborhood or draw something. I am not so good at doing these activities, but I think it is meaningful to just do them, because after I have a productive weekend, I am ready to welcome Monday with excitement!
강사 첨삭
Hello Ella! Thank you for this. Yes, spending your time productively is always fulfilling.
- T. Beth
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For me, an ideal weekend is full of some qualitative analogue activities. >>> correct
Of course, I don\'t deny the fact that I sometimes need to relax by doing nothing or using smart phones especially when I had hard weekdays.
>>> correct
But I usually watch endless Youtube videos or binge Netflix because of laziness or self-justification.
>>> But I usually watch endless Youtube videos or binge on Netflix because of laziness or self-justification.
And about Sunday evening, I feel emptiness, asking myself \"WHERE IS MY WEEKEND??\".
>>> correct
>>> OR: For Sunday evenings, I feel emptiness, asking myself \"WHERE DID MY WEEKEND GO?\".
Then I am stressed and tired and that doesn\'t make me feel really refreshed.
>>> correct
Therefore, the first, important thing for my ideal weekends is to stay away from my smartphone.
>>> correct
(It is still so hard but I am trying) And in order to replace smartphone and have some fun, I cook for my family or just myself, read some books with a high concentration, go around the neighborhood or draw something.
>>> correct
I am not so good at doing these activities, but I think it is meaningful to just do them, because after I have a productive weekend, I am ready to welcome Monday with excitement!
>>> correct
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