(HW) If you could prepare a dish for a VIP, what would it be and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
If VIP is foreigner, I would prepare Bibimbap the Korean traditional food. Bibimbap is the food that is mixed with various ingredients like vegetables and meat in rice. The reason why I choose this food is that Bibimbap can be changed various. We can put seasonal ingredients or VIP\'s favorite ingredients. Perhaps I can give VIP healthy and delicious dish by preparing Bibimbap.
If VIP is Korean, I would prepare a dish with seasonal food. There are so many seasonal food so I can\'t choose one. But seasonal food is big, nutritious and delicious, so I can also give VIP healthy and delicious dish with seasonal food.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
I think Bibimbap would be a good dish to serve foreigners because it is not only healthy but it is also full of colors especially when you use traditional ingredients. I would love to eat Bibimbap made by you. ^ ^
-Rachel
If VIP is foreigner, I would prepare Bibimbap the Korean traditional food.
>> If the VIP is a foreigner, I would prepare Bibimbap which is a Korean traditional food.
Bibimbap is the food that is mixed with various ingredients like vegetables and meat in rice.
>> Bibimbap is mixed food which consists of various ingredients like vegetables, meat and rice.
The reason why I choose this food is that Bibimbap can be changed various.
>> The reason why I chose this food is that Bibimbap has many variations.
We can put seasonal ingredients or VIP\'s favorite ingredients.
>> We can add seasonal ingredients or add the VIP\'s favorite ingredients.
Perhaps I can give VIP healthy and delicious dish by preparing Bibimbap.
>> correct
>> OR: Perhaps, I can serve the VIP a healthy and delicious dish by preparing Bibimbap.
If VIP is Korean, I would prepare a dish with seasonal food.
If VIP is Korean, I would prepare a dish with seasonal food.
>> correct
>> OR: If the VIP is Korean, I would serve him a dish using seasonal ingredients.
There are so many seasonal food so I can\'t choose one.
>> correct
>> OR: There are various seasonal foods, so I can\'t choose one.
But seasonal food is big, nutritious and delicious, so I can also give VIP healthy and delicious dish with seasonal food.
>> correct
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.