HW: If you had to choose between a satisfying job and a well-paid one, which would you choose?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'ll choose a satisfactory job.
Of course, it is good to earn a lot of money and do a lot of things. But it takes that much effort to earn that much money.
Therefore, I want to work happily, receiving enough money to live by doing what I want.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Hazel! ^^
Good choice! I agree with your opinion.
Good choice! I agree with your opinion.
I hope you will have a satisfying job in the future. :)
See you in class!
- T. Rina
1. I\'ll choose a satisfactory job.
>> CORRECT!
2. Of course, it is good to earn a lot of money and do a lot of things.
>> CORRECT!
3. But it takes that much effort to earn that much money.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
4. Therefore, I want to work happily, receiving enough money to live by doing what I want.
>> CORRECT!
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