Hw>> Is there any place in the world you would never want to travel to? Why is that?
학생이 쓴 원문
The nation I would never want to travel to is India. I have been interested in India because of the movie like \'3 idiots\' or the books that cover the India culture. That country itself has very charming elements like the search of spiritual enlightenment, crowded but very humane and exotic streets or etc. So I wished I would travel to India. But according to a lot of advice(direct and indirect - Youtube or Book-), they said me that is such a innocent thought, not a realistic thought. There are many crime damages to travelers. Exaggerating is basic, and bad business practices are rampant that attract buyers even by fraud. And especially to women, it is very dangerous to travel to India. Therefore, I decide to only enjoy India by movies or books.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ella. Thank you for this. It is probably okay if you travel in the big cities and to travel in a group. Even better if you know someone who lives there to guide you around.
- T. Beth
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I have been interested in India because of the movie like \'3 idiots\' or the books that cover the India culture.
>>> I have been interested in India because of the movie like \'3 idiots\' or the books that cover the Indian culture.
That country itself has very charming elements like the search of spiritual enlightenment, crowded but very humane and exotic streets or etc.
>>> That country itself has very charming elements like the search for spiritual enlightenment, crowded but very humane and exotic streets, etc.
So I wished I would travel to India.
>>> correct
But according to a lot of advice(direct and indirect - Youtube or Book-), they said me that is such a innocent thought, not a realistic thought.
>>> But according to a lot of advice(direct and indirect - Youtube or Book-), they told me that it is such an innocent thought, not a realistic one.
There are many crime damages to travelers.
>>> correct
>>> OR: It is quite dangerous for travelers there.
Exaggerating is basic, and bad business practices are rampant that attract buyers even by fraud.
>>> OR: Exaggerating is basic, and bad business practices are rampant where they attract buyers even through fraud.
And especially to women, it is very dangerous to travel to India.
>>> And especially for women, it is very dangerous to travel in India.
Therefore, I decide to only enjoy India by movies or books.
>>> Therefore, I decide to only enjoy India through movies or books.
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